Gambia-L: These modifications were sent to me by a concerned person who wishes to remain anonymous. Ebrima Ceesay ___________________________________________________________________ >To: "ebrima ceesay" <[log in to unmask]> >Subject: the draft petition modifications >Date: Tue, 2 Oct 2001 21:49:04 +0100 > >Ebrima, > >Well, I am waiting to get to talk to you personally on the telephone this >evening. You've tried me twice and I've been engaged, and I've tried to >get hold of you three times and you are engaged. It's a bit like telephone >hopskotch !! > >Anyway, vis-a-vis the petition from Katim Touray: may I make the following >amendments: > >1st Para: not stellar - use notable or commendable. > >2nd Para: say (line 2) - on the tragic deaths and injuries >occasioned......... Omit "tragic" from 'terrorist acts'. > >3rs Para: instead of "in tragic way", say "tragically" or "sadly". > >4th Para: say "to express our concerns about the current political >atmosphere" - rather than "present". > >5th Para: say instead: " Since Jammeh came to power in a military coup in >1994, he has instituted a government which has no regard for human rights, >democracy and the rule of law". > _________________________________________________________________ Get your FREE download of MSN Explorer at http://explorer.msn.com/intl.asp ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe/subscribe or view archives of postings, go to the Gambia-L Web interface at: http://maelstrom.stjohns.edu/archives/gambia-l.html You may also send subscription requests to [log in to unmask] if you have problems accessing the web interface and remember to write your full name and e-mail address. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------