Dear Jane,

Thanks for your kind and encouraging words. I'm glad you enjoyed your trip to The Gambia and that you loved this little story.

Baba

>From: Jane Warner <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: Re: One day, Long ago . . .
>Date: Tue, 1 Feb 2005 09:31:17 -0800
>
>
>Dear Mr. Jallow,
>
>    Thank you for this lovely piece.  I just returned from my second
>trip to my husband's home in Allunhari.  I love all the kids and
>people I've met there.  Your writing makes me imagine I can
>understand all the things the kids say (not that I saw kids taunting
>anyone) and something of their internal lives, tho I'm still
>struggling just to get my greetings right!
>
>with best regards,
>
>
>Zainaba Warner (Dukuray)
>
>Seattle, Washington
>
>
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>On Tue, 1 Feb 2005, Baba Galleh Jallow wrote:
>
>>
>>
>>
>>One day, Long ago . . .
>>
>>By Baba Galleh Jallow
>>
>>‘Daddy! Daddy?’
>>
>>My mother’s voice did not distract me from watching the drama on
>>the
>>street. I was safely hidden behind our bamboo fence and peeping
>>through a
>>crack. Pappa the mad man was still a few feet away, but I could
>>hear the
>>children taunting him.
>>
>>‘Daddy is that you?’ My mother called again. I glanced over my
>>shoulder
>>and saw her standing at the kitchen door.
>>
>>‘No, Mama it’s not me. I’m here,’ I said.
>>
>>‘Don’t you go out there fighting,’ she warned.
>>
>>‘There’s no one fighting,’ I said. ‘The children are taunting
>>Pappa.’
>>
>>‘Well don’t you go taunting any mad men or you will get your head
>>broken,’ she said.
>>
>>I resumed my peeping as mama disappeared back into the kitchen.
>>Pappa was
>>now almost adjacent my hiding place and I felt my heart beating
>>faster. I
>>was so afraid of mad men, particularly Pappa. People said mad men
>>had
>>superhuman strength, their own strength and the strength of the
>>devils
>>that possessed them. So I was never one to taunt a mad man or go
>>mango
>>stealing.
>>
>>I saw Pappa walk past me, his gray tattered boubou reaching only to
>>his
>>knees, his big hands dangling by his sides. He was always
>>barefooted and
>>bareheaded. I never heard him talk. Sometimes, he ignored the
>>children
>>and would not chase them as they were now challenging him to do.
>>But it
>>was known that if Pappa decided to chase somebody, he would never
>>give
>>up. A few months before, he had chased Ndoi right into her mother’s
>>bedroom and pulled her out from under the bed and almost strangled
>>her to
>>death. Only the timely intervention of Ndoi’s father and brothers
>>saved
>>her life. And there she was again with the other children, shouting
>>‘Pappa come and chase me! Pappa come and chase me!’ On that day, it
>>seemed, Pappa was in no mood for chasing anybody and soon, the
>>children
>>gave up.
>>
>>Pappa was just one of the many mad men in the village. No one knew
>>where
>>they came from and each one of them hated something. Pappa hated
>>‘come
>>and chase me.’ Gankal, who could not speak and who barked like a
>>dog,
>>hated ‘wet skin.’ Like Pappa, Gankal sometimes ignored the children
>>when
>>they called him ‘wet skin.’ But sometimes, he would grab a stone, a
>>bottle or a stick and furiously haul it at the children. And he
>>would
>>angrily bark like a dog and keep hauling missiles. One day, he
>>smashed
>>Basiru’s head with a big stone and drew a lot of blood. I never
>>called
>>Gankal ‘wet skin’ and when I saw him coming down the road, I either
>>turned back or hid somewhere till he passed.
>>
>>And there was Alagi, who hated Oh, Tuuk! Alagi did not beat people
>>or
>>throw missiles at them. His specialty was cussing. He had a very
>>sharp
>>tongue and cussed the parents of anyone who dared to call him Oh,
>>Tuuk. I
>>never called him Oh, Tuuk. Alagi knew the entire Koran by heart and
>>people said too much learning drove him mad. They said he had read
>>some
>>verses that were too heavy for his head.
>>
>>And there were Father Borro, Kumba the Genie and Franco the thief.
>>Franco
>>the thief stole anything under the sun - from clothes left in the
>>sun to
>>dry, to a raw piece of fish - anything that could help buy a glass
>>or
>>bottle of senga, or local beer. Franco the thief was always drunk.
>>
>>After Pappa disappeared into the distance without a chase, I came
>>out of
>>hiding and joined the other children. It was a happy day for me.
>>There
>>was no school and my Koranic teacher had traveled. So I was free to
>>play
>>soccer and wrestle in the sand and go hunting birds or do anything
>>the
>>other children wanted to do.
>>
>>Pappa was long forgotten when someone spotted Grandpa Biram in the
>>distance and shouted, ‘Grandpa Biram is coming!’ We all scrambled
>>to our
>>feet and ran toward Grandpa Biram chanting, ‘Grandpa Biram where’s
>>Yasin?
>>Grandpa Biram where’s Yasin?’ Grandpa Biram responded ‘Yasin is in
>>Paradise.’
>>
>>Grandpa Biram where’s Yasin? Yasin in the Paradise. Grandpa Biram
>>where’s
>>Yasin . . . ?
>>
>>Yasin was Grandpa Biram’s mother and every time we saw Grandpa
>>Biram
>>coming down the street, we followed him chanting, asking where
>>Yasin was.
>>And he would tirelessly respond, ‘Yasin is in Paradise.’ I chanted
>>after
>>Grandpa Biram because he was not a mad man like Pappa or Gankal. He
>>was a
>>very old man who always wore a red hat and walked very slowly,
>>using a
>>walking stick. But he was a nice old man and all of us children
>>loved
>>him. He never got annoyed at us or refused to answer our endless
>>questions.
>>
>>That day, as usual, we followed Grandpa Biram right up to his
>>compound
>>gate where he stopped and turning toward us, kindly said, as he
>>usually
>>did: ‘Yasin is in Paradise. Thank you all. Now run home and play.’
>>
>>‘Goodbye Grandpa Biram,’ we all chanted. ‘Goodbye Grandpa Biram!’
>>Then we
>>ran back to continue playing.
>>
>>The next day I saw a lot of people hurrying down the street. I ran
>>up to
>>my mama and asked her where so many people were going.
>>
>>‘Grandpa Biram died,’ she said.
>>
>>I ran back to my friends to announce the news.
>>
>>‘Grandpa Biram died,’ I announced. I don’t remember if anyone heard
>>me or
>>not.
>>
>>
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